Talk:It's Just Unfair/@comment-5277627-20160101040540

Okay so I just started reading this and it's really interesting! I'm reading this and there seems to be so many candidates for first boot. Every time I think someone is going to be it, someone else does something that makes me think it's them. On Bazid I think Gray and Lola are in trouble (because Gary is a complainer and Lola basically put herself out there as weak in challenges) and on Izir I think Alexis is in trouble because she's playing the game waaay too hard. It's too early to pick favourites but I'm really looking forward to this.

One thing I would suggest though is, when the castaways are giving their first impressions on the truck or whatever, and they say "that dude in the green hat looks like trouble", perhaps put "Sam (refering to Ian)". Like, putting the person's name in brackets or something. Because someone who hasn't seen the avatars beforehand (like me) will have no clue who you're talking about without going down to the still in the running chart.

Hope you're not too taken aback by my constructive criticism (I know some don't like it). I really like this so far and I'm definitely going to keep reading.