Talk:Heart of a Champion/@comment-5277627-20150623010855

For me, it's no longer a question of "who will win?" but "who will lose against Rudy?"

Rudy is pretty nuch the epitome of a Mary-Sue, which is a character you need to avoid. I know you meant for him to be the likable underdog, but for me he just turned into the guy who has everything good happen to him. He's won challenge after challenge, he was in posession of both idols and played them all, and the only juror he's pissed off is Nathan, so I would say he is an absolute shoo-in to win the title, and I've had the feeling for the last 3 episodes. :)

I'm sorry to sound so harsh. I'm really looking forward to your next season so I can see you improve, because you do have potential to be a very good fanon writer. :)

As it is, I was rooting for Daphne, but now I will root for Fred as he seems like the only person who has even a slight chance of beating Rudy. :P