User blog comment:Tanglefrost/Eyre Peninsula- Feedback, Criticism, Critique/@comment-11161432-20150913103128/@comment-5277627-20150913123246

Hey, I totally agree with you about both those things. Horatio and Holly, being one of the more "normal" and "everyday" characters, I found I was really struggling to write for them. Like I said I treat Survivor like a story and create characters for a story and not so much ones that would be cast IRL. Horatio and Holly will definitely be getting a bigger edit.

As for the challenge thing, I agree. It comes down to the story thing again and feeling the need to describe as much detail as possible. But from next season, I think I will just do a results table & summary.

Thanks for your critiques!