User blog comment:Tozza6/Sulawesi Feedback + Season 2 Changes/@comment-26485526-20161026202532

Honestly Tozza, Sulawesi was amazing and your writing style is amazing. One of your biggest strengths seems to be character development, which is not an easy thing to do at all.

The only change I would like to see is maybe a season without so many tribe switches. In Sulawesi, there was a tribe switch literally after every 2 episodes before the merge. While it worked great for this fast-paced season and kept things interesting, it didn't really allow for any rivalries for example to build slowly, or any strong bonds to develop (save for Natasha and Dakota)

So yeah, I'd like to maybe see you try a story with a bit of a slow burn throughout the season if you know what I mean. Allowing something to build for a while would make the eventual power switch, betrayal, or whatever appear that much more meaningful/shocking when it eventually happens. Since character development is one of your strengths, I do feel like you would be very talented at writing this type of story.

I wish you the best of luck in your second season. I'll definitely be reading!