User blog comment:Tanglefrost/Eyre Peninsula- Feedback, Criticism, Critique/@comment-24347009-20150913115950

Well, you know I absolutely adore your season, so there's not much to critique.

One thing I would point out is that, like MightyUke says, sometimes the fanon isn't the most realistic in terms of characters. It's unlikely Survivor would cast people who are stupid like Kelly, ridiculously egotistical like Kris, crazy like Elijah, vindictive and mean like Audrey, or super-shy and anti-social like Timothy. However, I wouldn't list this as a downside of your season, because these wacky personalities and funny scenes that come about because of them, no matter how unlikely to occur in real life, give your season the charm that I think a lot of people like. It seems that, through your writing, you're owning the craziness and silliness of it all, so just keep that in mind if you intended for it to be a season I could imagine being in the canon series.

I would somewhat agree with Winx that Horatio and Holly have been under-edited slightly, but as of the merge episode I would only apply that to Holly because Horatio has been developed as this challenge beast who has a rivalry with Kris.

Besides that one critique, I can't really think of anything else to mention. Like I said, EP is a great seasno and if you just keep doing what you're doing, you'll naturally improve as time goes on and are already at a great point.