Talk:It's Like a World Clash/@comment-38115759-20191002034729

You asked me for some feedback on this a while ago, I'm so sorry that it has taken me this long to get back to you, my real life gets in the way sometimes.

I haven't finished the episode yet, but I have started. (I'll add to this as I continue reading)

Here are a few early thoughts;


 * Not doing a traditional-style fanon is working for you. The cast is a little zany, a little crazy, some big, fun personalities to work with, so the deviation from the traditional style compliments that well. It's "fun", some people will like it, some won't, that's a matter of personal opinion. Some people like characters, some like super-serious gamebots.


 * Back to the cast for a moment, I do like that you've managed to give everyone a unique voice, that's impressive, especially in a cast of 24. The whacky, zany, over the top personalities are a breath of fresh air on this wiki. (Do be careful about leaning too much on racial stereotypes though.)


 * I'm not big on the world clash theme, it's just not my cup of tea, but that's personal opinion. It works with such an out-there season though and honestly, judging from the activity you have for a new author, people and enjoying it.


 * As Tangle said below, you gave away the tribes before the castaways were in them, killed a bit of the suspense, but that's a minor thing.


 * As far as the technical side of writing goes, it's impressive. Your season flows nicely and you have the perfect balance of describing a scene and not getting bogged down in details, which is also a breath of fresh air on this wiki.

Overall, you've given yourself a very strong start to the season, best of luck with the rest of it. :)