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Oh I read it. Things went pretty much how I was expecting them to go when I saw those two were on the same tribe. I felt like I handed you two character and said "Here's a man who can win the game (Brian), And here's the man who can fuck it all up (LJ)." Though I could also say that about LJ and Isabella.

You picked up a lot of details about all of them that I thought about while writing  but chose not to include, which was pleasantly surprising. It was a pretty decent First episode and I was impressed by it. You did a good job. I found it quite enjoyable.