Thread:KLS2097/@comment-5277627-20160406115540/@comment-27246540-20160413051741

I've read the first episode, and I have to say, it was a good way to introduce the majority of the characters. I liked the twist following the Schoolyard Pick; it was especially good to see Aloma overcome Whitney to earn a spot. I admittedly did want to see more of Alfonso, though, since I liked the character and his strategy (although it did fall flat on his face).

I can't wait to read more of your series. It's really attention-grabbing.