Thread:DVMP/@comment-25429296-20141012011553/@comment-24347009-20141012022036

They're mostly minor things, but:

For the twists, the format should be "Exile Island: A place where blah blah blah" instead of "Exile island a place where blah blah blah"

For the castaways template, the "Finish" and "Vote Against" sections are missing boxes, and all around, it would be easier to just copy a castaways chart from someone else's fanon and put it onto yours, as it would look more professional.

For the voting history, again, I suggest copying off a voting history from someone else's fanon, with Redemption Island, because your current voting history has some sloppiness to it (and I'm not saying it critically at all).

Overall, just be sure to capitilze title's a bit more, and besides that, your fanon's looking good. Be sure to ask if you don't understand how to do any of what I just said, I'm here to help.