Talk:That Blew My Pants/@comment-24347009-20140721205735

Honestly, you keep saying how horrible this fanon is and obviously since it's been quite good so far, you;re talking about the future. If you think this fanon won't have many moves, and that everyone is too scared to make one, then why don;t you just change that? Make Betty get out Lara, or vice versa. Make Gary and Steven finally go to blows and cause a shift or something. Because honestly, it seems like you're not enjoying writing this fanon, and if that's the case, you should probably rethink your storyline.

Anyway, on a more positive note, I'm liking it so far, still rooting for Olga, and on Pajaro, I'm rooting for Betty.