Talk:Something Truly Wonder-Stupid/@comment-5277627-20181105010040

I totally didn't forget to comment, shut up

I really liked this episode (aside from the fucking TRAGIC boot). Leah is a goddess among the peasants and King Constantine and Queen Irene continue their reigns. Love them. <3

This episode was a great mix of strategy and entertainment. It really made me appreciate Constantine so much more. He's definitely proved why he's one of my favourites. Irene's confessionals continue to be gold even if she is highkey terrible at the game.

Tesla continued to suck so bad and while I'm glad her idiocy blew the plan up it sucks that Tori was the victim. I can't wait for Tesla to have a meltdown and quit over it <3

I figured Cassy would stay because of her continuing storyline with Tesla, but still you did a great job at building the suspense as to who would really go.

One thing I've noticed over the past couple of episodes that's bothering me a bit is how you're really tell-y rather than show-y. Like, you tell us things rather than show. For example, I can't remember who it was, but you put in brackets they were lying. Like, have the conversation take place after something else where they've given a conf saying they'll do it, or have a conf after being like "yeah that was a total lie, I wanted to make XYZ comfortable." Stories just work a lot better, IMO, if the reader is able to figure things out for themselves and have things make sense rather than just being straight up told something.

Also, Ricki is mind-numbingly boring she needs to go pls. But still, great episode as always and I'm loving this cast. <3

CAST RANKING

1. Goddess Leah Derry

2. Constantine

3. Irene

4.  Cassy

5. Marshall (beautiful harmless creature love him)

6. Jimmy

7. Alan (he's only here because the others suck worse. Like, he's purple and he can fuck off with calling Leah a self-righteous prick next episode when he was literally the most self-righteous person on the planet the previous episode, no thanks)

8. Ricki (b o r i n g)

9. Kane (still yuck)

10. Tesla