Talk:And That Is How The Cookie Crumble/@comment-5277627-20150426090303

Okay, let me give you some advice. :)

Straight away I don't even have to read your immunity challenge and I know who wins, because of that thing you have at the top. I'd leave the thing as TBD to add suspense. :)

I noticed a few grammar/spelling/punctuation errors that kinda bugged me a little, but I'll let it go. :P

Also, there's an error in here:

Bosco: But how?

Rachel: That is where you need to apologize to Bosco again, and we will try and see whether we can get Jordan to flip, he looks intellegent.

(I think maybe you meant Thomas? Bosco wouldn't be apologising to himself.)



I think you've done a good job in setting up suspense for the later episodes. Sally is starting to bug me, but I think she might quit soon. Michelle and Patrick I can see flipping. I am still rooting for Patrick! GO PATRICK GO!

I think if any of Mazaki have a brain in their head, they'll split Zack and Danielle before the merge. Really can't stand Zack and Danielle. Sorry, they bug me. ;P



I actually like Bosco now! I was rooting for him this episode. From the Gomane tribe I am rooting for Bosco and Andrea, and I want to see Jordan booted. You actually had me thinking for a while that Jordan would go.



Overall, I enjoyed the ep! Can't wait for the next one. I'm still Team Patrick all the way! GO PATRICK!

(waves banner and dances like a moron)