Talk:Survivor: The Cursed Idol/@comment-28071401-20120804174151/@comment-28071401-20120806125811

Kay, I'll try you sugestion so more from thrid person view eg. "When rakai got back to camp" rather then "When we got back to camp" I have planed out on a word document, I should have done this earlyer but i'm going to download MS word My computer was a windows 7 starter which came with word pad which is crap and dosent have spell check or anything, thanks for being truthful