User blog comment:Tanglefrost/Eyre Peninsula- Feedback, Criticism, Critique/@comment-11161432-20150913103128

Hey Tangle, I love your series, but I have only a few problems with them.

1. You haven't really developed Holly and Horatio that well, I forgot their personalities already!

2. This is just me, but at this rate, the challenges are just. Bland, I love reading the challenges, (especially the reward ones) but now, anytime there was a reward challenge I just ran off to see who won it. And what will you do now?

That's the only problems I have, your series is great 8.5/10