Talk:Granny's Playing Survivor!/@comment-2203959-20150416020353

You're off to a good start!

You have lots of dialogue and you're already developing quite a few characters it seems! It's hard to judge since you're only on Day 1, but I'd say it seems good so far.

My advice in continuing writing since you have so many castaways is to make sure you take the time to develop many of your characters in these first few episodes instead of just focusing on a few of the characters with the most personality, that way the readers can have a better idea of who they want to root for or against!

But so far so good :)