Thread:Theamazingsurvivorace/@comment-5491116-20120619205053

You're fanon holds minimal story. you should take a little bit more time and make a bit more effort to increase the length and depth of the story, or else it will not be as good as it could be. this fanon has potential, but I advise you spend a bit more time creating each episode. And please do not create a new episode page until the previos one (along with all others) are complete, storywise. If you have any questions or require assisstance, you know who to talk to! Thanks! 