Thread:MightyUke416/@comment-25201371-20170522030626/@comment-26485526-20170522035642

I just read the first episode, and I thought it was very good! I really thought Jasper was a goner after Cheiko lied about having the idol, so you did a great job with that blindside! I also really like the idea of the dream/nightmare twist and how that played out.

Right now, my favourites are Fatima, Enzo, and Tito, so I hope they last a while.

I guess my main criticism would be that the personalities of a lot of your characters are very over the top (Cheiko, Jasper, Lyon, and Gunnar especially), so basically, it just doesn't appear to be completely realistic. Another thing that I noticed is that swear words aren't censored (at least not in the first episode). I don't care that your characters swear, but I find it really weird that the swearing is not censored (since Survivor is a "family show", and they would normally censor that stuff). To censor the F-word for example, I usually type it as "f***".

I don't care about the swearing, it just caught me off guard, that's all.

Overall, your first episode was really well done! Keep up the good work!