User blog comment:Sinjoh/Thoughts and Predictions On My Fan Fiction/@comment-5098907-20120721222145

I believe it's coming along great.

I don't know why, but the Pokemon references you used as names help me know which character is which. And that is something I usually have trouble with when reading the first couple episodes of a fanon.

Also, I like the way you make Tribal Council. Like Jeff knows the perfect questions to ask the tribe.