Thread:MightyUke416/@comment-28876467-20170329230555/@comment-26485526-20170329233803

I think it was a pretty good episode. You had me really thinking that Conner was going to be going home there, so you did a good job at leaving me surprised with the result.

I think you're doing a good job with the character development overall, especially on Zikomo. I feel like I have a great sense of who each character is and I've been able to develop opinions on each character (I love Vanessa & Marisa, Charlie's okay, I dislike Linda & Jerome, and I HATE Drew)

I also think you're doing a great job with the character development on Lapani. Li is the character that is surprising me the most. I thought she'd be just another old lady that would be booted for being weak, but she's showing to be a pretty smart player and I'm rooting for her!

The only tribe that I think can use some improvement is Kambuku. I wouldn't say that you're doing a bad job writing for them, but Claire is the only character from that tribe I have a good read on at the moment, because she is clearly intelligent and I think she will go far. Then again, maybe this is because the other two tribes (especially Zikomo) are full of people with such strong personalities.

So yeah, great job on the episode so far. I think you guys will only get better as the season progresses. :)