Talk:Survivor: Bolivia/@comment-11518628-20140704142804

Lovely work Ted, I really enjoyed it! Some fanons struggle to do so, but you did an amazing at introducing your characthers. Just in day one, you made sure we knew who was the lazy guy, who was gonna probably be the villain and that's always good, because the first episode is always the grabber and if you don't know what the hell is going on and whose doing what you lose viewers. You've showned the premises of who likes who and who dislikes who and we have a clear mind of the different groups and can now start visualizing how this fanon will turn out!

There was a couple grammatical order every here and there, but nothing major, and your spelling was almost flawless! And I love the tribe names and colors, very unique! Original challenges is always something I look forward to in a fanon and so you did a very good job with your reward and immunity challenges. Also, some fanons neglect to actually write the challenge happening itself which you did and did a very good job of. You used multiple factors such as camp life, challenges, strategy into the vote outs that made things so unpredictable and made you keep reading.

Your challenge/swap/voting tables could be improved to look nicer (I can help you with that if you need), but they are not as relevant. A fanon needs twists that go together and you definitely did that. The tribe switch twist went perfectly well with the tribeless feature. You did not rely heavily on idols and revotes, which I also found good. Your logo is beautiful, you so perf, and the season was done in a very timely manner (two months when a season can take over a year)! So keep up the ratchet work you g.oddess. And props for making a season summary. <3