User blog comment:Tanglefrost/Eyre Peninsula- Feedback, Criticism, Critique/@comment-24347009-20150913115950/@comment-5277627-20150913123019

Thanks for that. :D

I was trying to be a little realistic but not in terms of who the Survivor producers would cast IRL. I'm treating this like a story and creating characters I think would be entertaining and would be fun to see in the game of Survivor, but next season I think I will aim for the more realistic and relatable type characters.

Horatio has been getting a kind of small edit because it took me a while to develop and understand his personality. I mean with people like Kris/Audrey, it was easy to write for them because theirn personalities were so detailed, but with someone like Horatio who was one of the more "normal" characters, I found it quite hard to write for, and had to kind of put myself in the shoes of a jock. The same applies to Holly, but she will be getting a bigger edit as the game goes on.

Thanks for your critiques!