Thread:Ethan0508/@comment-27630482-20170315161221/@comment-27630482-20170315174728

Okay, so minor things first, in the premiere episode, usually when they give the first confessionals, they give like, two confessionals for BLAH tribe and two for BLEH and two for BLECH, or three for BLAH and three for BLEH. Not a big deal, but something that bothers me since I'm the pickiest person on the planet. Second, the title for the first episode is "First Impressions Are Tough" though no one says that. They say that they're important, though. Third, can you add an explanation for why Mya suddenly thinks she's going home so suddenly? Four, since when did Nicholas have an alliance? It suddenly appeared out of nowhere. This is just the premiere, but I think mainly just work on the flow of the story, and work on explanations.

Otherwise, I love it!