Thread:DVMP/@comment-5277627-20150808095230

Hi DVMP

Could you do me the BIGGEST favour? I've been working on the Day 22 Van Diemen section, and I've written a section where XXX goes to talk to XXX about XXX, and I can't decide whether to put it in Day 22 (because Day 22 seems a little short) or Have all the talk about XXX in Day 23. Can you read it and give me some advice? Cheers. :)

Reading FP by the way and all I can say is:

ALBERT'S MOUSTACHE. <3  