Thread:KLS2097/@comment-25323662-20160815084424

I've seen you're like fantastic at giving critique of good and bad points on fan fiction. And no-one's really given me any on Survivor: Nicobar. So I would appreciate it if you did it for Nicobar. It's fine if you don't have time and I completely understand if you don't want to. I'd just really love to know what Ii could do to improve and what I'm doing well.

Thanks, Crazy. 