Talk:I Don't Expect Her to Last/@comment-5277627-20150710112141

I liked this episode, especially since it was your first one. :)

What I would say is that the tribe sections were really short, and too short for me to get an impression on characters, but I'm sure you've improved on that as the episodes go along. :)

Also, I would say work on creating some suspense at the pre-tribal thing when everyone is discussing who to vote off. Even if someone is not going home, chuck their name in or something. Because I was 100% convinced that Carlita was going home, so I didn't feel the need to read Tribal (I did anyway). I liked the way you did Tribal though. It was good. :)

I also like the "Next Time" section as it's got me excited for the next episode. I'll keep reading for sure.