Talk:Survivor: The Cursed Idol/@comment-28071401-20120804174151/@comment-5492377-20120806124116

Grammar aside it's okay, but I suggest you write your fanons in paragraph form because too much dialogue eats up a huge space in your page (having a short story but your page is too long because of too much spaces). Lessen your dialogues and just give us a view of what's going on. You can do that without giving out too much speeches.