Talk:Go Big, Or Go Home/@comment-9258976-20140623011848/@comment-9258976-20140624151332

I hope I didn't offend you, because that wasn't my intention by any means. I just found parts of the episode to be rushed, which I find is something that a lot of people do too, even myself! There were also just little things that seemed rushed in the storyline and editing (for example, in one of his confessionals kordans name is listed as "Kordan)" Just little things like the accidental ")" make things look a little messy. All around there was a newness to your writing, which isn't a bad thing at all. We all have it when we start, I'm not even to try and sound like some perfect seasoned writer, I'm not. I am however really enjoying the series thus far. Fanons are a learning curv, we all fall into our own writing style :)