Talk:She's Our Lesbian Jesus/@comment-28913090-20180926171204/@comment-26184525-20180926183704

I see what you guys are saying and knew something along these lines was coming my way. The reason why I wrote two similar scenes (feeling sympathy for the antagonist) was because the reasons behind each one was different. Brad's was because he had given up on his own game and regretted his actions so his sympathy isn't necessarily a last ditch effort, more so he is trying to mend those wounds for his own sake. Cameron's scene was less because Cameron cared how he was treated people and was genuinely sorry but more because he wanted to stay in the game so I wouldn't say his had good intentions. However the parallels are uncanny I will say.

Sorry for making the scene repetitive! I appreciate the feedback it gives me something to remember when writing in the future!